All i remember is collapsing and getting rushed into a ambulance,after that i blacked out later i had a dream it felt like it was forever.But after the happy dream i awoke from my heavy sleep and panicked and turned there was a piece of paper and a note the note said ¨you are going to be safe i'll be back before you know ¨ in my dad's handwriting.
that is my narrative,I hoped you liked the start of it
Thanks for reading.
what would you add to the story ?
how would you feel if that was you ?
Aloha Tallulah,
ReplyDeleteI love your snippet.
That sounds like a very interesting narrative.
Don't forget to add a capital letter when you write an I in the middle of your sentence.
From Jennah
Hello Jennah !
DeleteThank you,
Yes i just saw that i will go fix it now
thanks Jennah