Friday 26 June 2020

My Narrative

Today we had to post our narrative to our blogs this is mine so far.
Have you done a narrative before ?
**This is not finished yet**
The hospital save story : By Tallulah Barham
Chapters :
The hospital
John B
JJ
Outer Banks
The lost treasure

The hospital chapter
All i remember is collapsing and getting rushed into a ambulance,after that i blacked out later i had a dream it felt like it was forever.But after the happy dream i awoke from my heavy sleep and panicked and turned there was a piece of paper and a note the note said  ¨you are going to be safe i'll be back before you know ¨ in my dad's handwriting.The piece of paper said ¨Sarah B coma so far fifteen  years ¨ so does that mean that i have been missing out fifteen years of my live in a hospital hoping one day i will be awoke from the deep sleep.I stood up with a bit of a wobble and tried to open the door of the hospital it was not budging at all  so i gave a little more of a budge and the door finally opened.One thing though was that the hospital was empty no one to be heard the hospital  i heard whispers you must think i am crazy but i just do not know what is happening.Just image a hospital empty peoples medical records all on the floor,pills all through the work way it was a bomb sight i could not believe my eyes ! i was not feeling so good so i took some pills to make me better and so i could get better concentration on what is going on after a little bit i  checked out of the windows and no one was there it was empty no body could be called or found surely someone out there is still here.I have no food so i walked down in the empty gloomy hallway of darkness and turned on the light to were the cafeteria is thankfully the power is working something felt odd about this place it did not feel right right after that i heard a cry for help down the hallway suddenly my heart dropped to my feet in disbelief that someone was still out there i rushed and ran down to number forty nine and used all my mighty power to get it opened and there they were laying on her bed wondering where they were




John b chapter
.He said ¨hi i am john b i was in a horrific boat accident and i do not know what is going on why is there no nurses here ¨  i took a deep breath and said i am sarah b what a weird thing we both names end with b anyway i still do not know why we are locked in this building but all i know is that we are going to get through this together john b agreed.John b was in  a little bit of pain so i went and got him some medication after that we both went together to go get something to eat the cafeteria was still full of food i made 2 minute noodles chicken flavour if we are getting into detail here and some water from the tap.We sat in my room and talked about our stories and we were trying to figure out why we were here and just trying to get over the shock of all of this mess.We started planning what to do,why we were here and how we are going to get out of this place.
We were all set and ready to plan  but there was no wifi/signal so we did not know what we were at our last plan to try to escape but we did not know how to we tried everything we could to escape but not one budget was made that whole time.





JJ chapter
We heard a yell ¨Änyone here im here to help if anybody is here ?! ¨” we rushed down to floor 19 there he was a human standing there i could not believe it we thought we might be the world's last hope to have someone rescue us he said he had a helicopter we raced outside and hopped in the helicopter me and John B were just in complete shock of what is happening i was asking JJ what is happening  he said ¨there are no questions to be asked we have to tell you everything when we land the helicopter ¨
Soon after we landed in a place called Outer Banks it is a small town where everybody knows each other and thinks of a really beachy movie and that is what it is.





Outer Banks
Dad was waiting. I had no clue what was going on. I was so confused I hopped off the helicopter and ran into my dad's arms and broke down. I realized that John B had no one waiting so dad offered John B a job to clean our  boats that we have.
JJ said that he doesn't know why we were there,after that i just went home because i was so tired of what had been happening the past few years i slept and woke up the next morning,
And that is how the Outer banks started.
After all that stuff that happened we all started being friends and hanging out.



The lost treasure a.k.a the gold
One day John B found something of his fathers it was a Their search of he truth led them on a treasure hunt for $400 million in gold. Their treasure hunt started after John B. and his friends found his father's compass that contained a clue about where the treasure was.We all knew we had to find the treasure that had been missing it was John B ‘s last hope of find the treasure because that was all he had of his dad left







2 comments:

  1. I like your story because you used creativity and good characters

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  2. HI Tallulah i like your blog post it was very creative.
    There lots of words witch i didnt like.
    it was very cool.

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