Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 16 June 2020
More of my writing
6 comments:
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
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Hi Tallulah, cool blog post about your story. It will be fantastic when it is finished. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHello Max,
DeleteThank you !
Hi Tallulah,
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing story,
I love the information and detail you put in it.
Next time you could fix the layout so it doesnt go off the screen!
Hi Charlotte
DeleteThank you so much
yes I just checked that thank you for taking time to comment.
Hi Tallulah,
ReplyDeleteThis sounds almost like a movie plot, Its amazing.
I cant wait to read more!
Next time you could change the layout so it doesn't go off the centre of the screen.
Anyway good job!
Hello Chelo
DeleteThank you !
yes I will be sure to change that :]