Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 4 December 2019
L O R D E
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Tallulah,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have used only a few colours on your poster, this makes it easier to view. I did not realise that Lorde had such a long name, I wonder where the name Yelich comes from?
Some feedback I would like to offer is to think about the space on your poster, you could have spread your information down the whole poster so you did not have a lot of empty area at the bottom.
Nga mihi,
Mark
Hello there Mark,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your positive feed back.
I will add that to my next blog post i do,
Thank you