Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 22 April 2020
buy a poppy !
one important thing about poppy's is it symbol's the soldiers.
People should wear them because it is way to show respects to the soldiers who were in the war.
thanks for reading,
have you ever brought a poppy before ?
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Hi Tallulah, great advertisement! This has made me want to go and buy a poppy! I wonder if we can after the lockdown...
ReplyDeleteI really like that you have explained why the poppy is important and what it represents!
Next time, just remember about punctuation. It seems as if you have forgotten about using capital letters.
Hi Tallulah
ReplyDeleteYou made a great advertisement.
I have brought a poppy before, have you?
You added terrific pictures to go with your advertisement and the colours really make the text pop.
From Jennah